I was a pupil at Rāwhiti School and this blog is where I shared my learning. This blog has been archived, no further content will be uploaded or added. You are welcome to continue viewing posts, however commenting has been disabled.
Tuesday, July 21, 2020
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Hi sophie
ReplyDeleteWell done
I really like how you had a equal amount of pictures to your words and how it was presented
It would be great if next time you could make it a little more out there and something you wouldn't know.
Great work
Hi Sophie.
ReplyDeleteI love the animal that you chose and all of the detail you put into writing about it. Next time I think that you should add some lables.
from Kiwa.
Hi Sophie,
ReplyDeleteThis post interested me a lot, what I was most interested about was about how they can't gallop or trot because I thought they could. I think you could have made it more colourful and you missed a few full stops.
Hi Maiah,
DeleteNext time I will proof read it and make sure it is a bit more colorful. Thanks for the comment