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Tuesday, July 21, 2020

MRS GREN - elephants

4 comments:

  1. Hi sophie
    Well done
    I really like how you had a equal amount of pictures to your words and how it was presented
    It would be great if next time you could make it a little more out there and something you wouldn't know.
    Great work

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  2. Hi Sophie.
    I love the animal that you chose and all of the detail you put into writing about it. Next time I think that you should add some lables.
    from Kiwa.

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  3. Hi Sophie,
    This post interested me a lot, what I was most interested about was about how they can't gallop or trot because I thought they could. I think you could have made it more colourful and you missed a few full stops.

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    1. Hi Maiah,
      Next time I will proof read it and make sure it is a bit more colorful. Thanks for the comment

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