Lights, Camera, Action!
How a normal every day 13 year old girl became famous.
Chapter 1: STAY CALM
It was a normal Saturday, I was sitting on my couch not doing anything and I hear my phone ring (which is very unusual because know one rings my phone except my mom). I pick it up and say “hello, Lily speaking” then i hear “hello my name is Becky I am the person who watched you do an audition two weeks ago” then I thought I did not get the part (it was for a small movie in new York where i live). “Oh, yeah I forgot” I said “well…” she said “YOU GOT THE PART!” “OMG!” I said “I can't believe it, when do I start?” “you start Monday” she said “um...i’m sorry but I have school” “well you can't have the part then” “I guess I can come” I said I don't know how my mom will feel about this. “Good” she said “see you on Monday” as soon as she hang up I rang my mom “hey” ‘hi” she said suspiciously “are you OK?” “yes never better” I said “I GOT THE PART” “for what?” “for the new York movie” “oh GOOD JOB” she said. “Um....I start on Monday,” I said , hoping that she would not say no “that is OK I guess, if you really want to?”
ReplyDeleteHi Sophie
That is an awesome start to a story.
I love how you made it like a dairy. Maybe next time you can try and put who is saying each sentence?
By the way Love your story starter its great.
I really like this story! It is really interesting and I love it!!!
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time dont add as many words in ALL CAPS?
So then when something exciting happens it would be more Exciting!
But it is really great!
Nice job!
Blue
Thanks BLUE
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